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You walk alone,
Sleep alone,
Cry alone,
Die alone.

You are the Wolf that walks alone.
You have no friends, none of your kind,
Will there ever be a friend for you to find?
You walk in sadness, and despair,
No one to love you, anywhere.

The world is cruel,
The world is mean,
You walk alone,
Always unseen.

This is your prayer,
A mournful song,
You have never had anywhere to belong.
This is your howl,
Your sad, sad cry.
Crying beneath the open sky.

Does anyone hear you?
Are you truly alone?
Does anyone care about you?
And your bitter moan?

Others walk for you not to find,
They don’t care, they have peace of mind.
You walk alone on a desolate plain,
Will you ever have a home again?

Will anyone cry, weep, wail, or moan,
At the death of the Wolf that walks alone?
Um, my friend says that this poem belongs to Kiba (from Wolf's Rain,) but honestly, I'm not so sure... Enjoy!
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:iconzippyzap1302:
ZippyZap1302 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016
Aw So Cute!!! Also I LOVE Wolves + Wolf's Rain RULES
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loracarol Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016
Thanks! :D
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ZippyZap1302 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016
Np U Just LOVE WOLVES & Do u mind that i Kinda Traced it?
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016
Er... What? It's writing, not an art piece; where/how would you be tracing it? :O
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ZippyZap1302 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016
Well Copied it onto paper Lol....
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016
Oh jeez, I'm sooo sorry for the late reply. I just. Didn't brain good. 

Yes, you have permission, and if you already did it, you have back-dated permission. :facepalm:

(Just please give me credit, if anyone asks. :meow:
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Pardorum Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Student Writer
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
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Shadowolf9900 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
*applause applause... what are you doing.. you...you in the corner... APPLAUSE FOR THIS MAN!!!* Nice work, beautiful piece. Love it! :D
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
Thank you for the fav, and the kind comments! :meow: I really do appreciate them both very much. :heart:
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Shadowolf9900 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
No Prob. I speak the whole hearted truth :3
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everytoon101 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student General Artist
T.T SO BEAUTIFUL *claps*
(in my thoughts)do do doooooo addition
along comes the lion with the care for you
he brightened up your path for that special wolf
now that lone wolfs cry is not so lone anymore .... X3 SORRY! I HAD TO!
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loracarol Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
Thank you for the fav! :meow: And the comment~ I love getting comments! :D

I do like that addendum! If you would like to post it, I wouldn't mind, but I'll admit, I'd rather not change the poem as it is- it's one of the first pieces of writing I did that I actually like! :meow:
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everytoon101 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student General Artist
;) well that's awesome and I love getting comments too =3 and sorry about that...theres a show called beyblade and I got that tiny section from that...weird huh
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Oh, I haven't seen Beyblade, so I didn't understand the reference, sorry. ^^;
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Dalekgirl117 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sometimes I feel like this
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
I think everyone does at some time. :)

Thank you for the fav, by the way, I really appreciate it. :meow:
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Dalekgirl117 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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coreena12 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconsadhugplz: i feel like this sometimes 2
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
:hug: thank you, and thank you for the fav, too. :meow:
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coreena12 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
no problem :)
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rayne123elm Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
but i dont sleep alone, my puppy sleeps by me :D
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
Puppies are the best. :meow:

Thank you for the fav on this!
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rayne123elm Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, kinda sounds like me
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DualMinded Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Such a painful notion.
A good poem.
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
Thank you.

And thank you for the fav. :meow:
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The-Nightingale-Poet Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing, I can really relate
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
Thank you. :heart: And thank you for the fav. :meow:
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:iconouellet:
ouellet Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011
im getting this tattood on my back!
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011
...

For serious?!

I mean, if you are... WOW. O___O

Please, send me a pic if you are able to go through with it! :heart:
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ouellet Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011
i will see im not sure witch one i will take but your is in the top 3 for sure!
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011
That' pretty cool! Thank you for letting me know~ <3
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oOAlice-B-RabbitOo Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow.....this is really...beautiful...
I guess no words can describe what this makes me feel inside...
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner May 9, 2011
Thank you so much for the kind comment, the fav, and the watch. All of it means a lot to me. :meow:
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bsincere Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beautiful poem
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
Thank you. :meow:

And thank you for the fav~ :meow:
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:iconwild-spirit-wolfgirl:
:omfg: i soo feel like this sometimes :(
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Oh, wow.... Thank you so much for the fav on it!
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:iconwild-spirit-wolfgirl:
no prob.^^
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ShadowFox214 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009
beautiful poem..
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009
Thanks. X3
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NotoriousDogfight Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2009
i feel like this all the time at school. i dont fit in anywhere, i feel like a desolate plain of pain and despair.
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NightTracker Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Wow, beautiful poem, was sent here to this via a cuz of mine. You have a nice talent! It reminds me of one of my rpg characters in a rpg im currently in. :)
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loracarol Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2008
Thank you very much. :)
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Sparkiih Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2008
Wow...this is really good, I can identify well with the emotions.... :+fav:
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:iconshikaikamaru:
Shikaikamaru Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2007
so you alone too so am I want a friend to cry and die with?
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2007
that would be nice...
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Shikaikamaru Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2007
:)
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:iconloracarol:
loracarol Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2007
Thanks!
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:iconshikaikamaru:
Shikaikamaru Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2007
your welcome
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